Large shiny black eyes,
beautiful thick brows,
Thin mouth set firmly, as if
everything she knows,
Silken flowing black hair,
falling on arms slightly bent,
Fists tightly closed, as if
on a mission she had been sent,
A mission that maybe she had
never liked at all,
Against which her heart had
given a passionate call…
Oft when in the morning the
mirror she saw,
Wondered she – with her face
what was the flaw ?
Whence came the fear she saw
in so many eyes,
Could no one even hope that
she might be nice ?
For they hated her even
before seeing her once,
Her fear was passed away
from fathers to sons,
So less were those that had
seen her face full,
They loved her beauty, said
they – of grace she was so full…
And they said her eyes were
full of love and pity,
Find they could not why
others thought she was all cruelty,
Had she not ended so many
unending sufferings ?
Had she not gone to those
who had called out her name,
In moments of hopelessness,
who had gone by her fame,
Thinking that to all their
problems she would be the solution,
Though never did she know
how they got this notion …
For only she knew what it
was to face the mother of the son she went to,
To look into the eyes of so
many others he had been known to,
To each of whose hearts were
tied strings he had pulled,
They all blamed her, not
seeing the tears she had in her eyes,
So she had learnt to smile,
not waiting any longer for her prize…
For such was her task, such
was her existence,
But I bow to her, for I have
heard my sentence,
Hear me, I look forward to
meet thee,
And I can hardly stop
feeling all glee,
I shall love you forever,
till time doth stoppeth,
None can take you away from
me, my dear Death !
1 comment:
Hahah, this is yet another even more toned-down output, no? :)
While the idea works for me alright, I would've loved it if you had put in the conflicting emotions with a bit more intensity. Right now, it's a good read but I don't feel the need to go through it once more to capture any hidden emotion somewhere which I might have missed the first time.
That's all, I guess. :) A really different approach to musing on Death - that was surely the best part of this.
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